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Reviewer: Amanda R Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 08/21/19 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

Interesting story. And interesting technology and discussions therein. However, you never delved deeply enough into them and the chapters were so short and abbreviated that you shortchanged yourself. Spending more time lingering on the changes this sort of stuff would make to society and the like and giving more ground rules and world building would've helped immensely and elevated this a lot.

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