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Reviewer: Lady Yuki Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/19 05:36 pm Title: From the Other Side

I think I know what is going on....I think.
Dee J split Doug's consciousness so "he" can be both Doug and Lucia.
That's my running theory for now.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/19 05:02 pm Title: From the Other Side

Awesome he/she gets to experience both lives? Very interesting!

Reviewer: Lady Yuki Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/16/19 12:49 am Title: Lucia's First Day

WHAT?!?!? I can't even imagine what is happening and I love that. I cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: Gotta keep you guessing, right? There will be an update soon! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/15/19 08:33 pm Title: Lucia's First Day

Wow! Excellent chapter, Doug is going crazy.

Author's Response: I appreciate you reading. Hope to have an update this weekend!

Reviewer: Lady Yuki Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 09:14 pm Title: Doug and the Djinn

Please continue. I want to see how Lucia goes forward and how she deals with her new life.
Also I am very interested in the mirror Lucia

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 08:59 pm Title: Doug and the Djinn

The theme has been around, but so have most of the others. You have fleshed (so to speak) it out nicely. Of course she will never be able to go back. She probably needs to lose 30 lbs, and to be able to control her sexuality a bit. Her sexuality needs to be a bit more under control. It may take a while for the lessons to be learned, but I think this genie has his heart in the right place. He will never let Lucia self destruct. Of course she will have babies and love every second of motherhood.

Author's Response: I wouldn't be so sure about where this one is headed, Portia. I am familiar with all of these outcomes from similar stories and I hope to take us somewhere new. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 07:11 pm Title: Doug and the Djinn

I caught his mistake right off the bat, excellent first chapter

Author's Response: Yeah. It's pretty much right there in the title.

Reviewer: djm3sho Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 06:54 pm Title: Doug and the Djinn

Love that Dee Jay!

D J

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