Date: 10/09/19 10:08 pm Title: Part 6 - The Day The Clocks Resumed
I don't know what the rating system is, but I give it high marks!
This is an amazing concept and fun to read story.
Prepare to have your hopes crushed, but never abandoned.
I for one am still reading.
Date: 10/08/19 08:37 pm Title: Part 6 - The Day The Clocks Resumed
now that we saw a whole lot of new content, that wasn't in the original story, some more feedback of mine. The story ist intriguing and very well layed out. It's nice to read, but it sometimes feels a bit rushed, with one action scene following the other. I think I would have liked more character developement of the MC thorough the story. He isn't reflecting his changes whatsoever. Or maybe it's just the form of narrator putting me of.
But all in all, a very nice story and I can't wait for the final resulotion: Why was storm picked and who was that mysterious lady who started it all?
Cheers and kudos.