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Reviewer: Atomic_clock Signed Report
Date: 10/09/19 10:08 pm Title: Part 6 - The Day The Clocks Resumed

I don't know what the rating system is, but I give it high marks!
This is an amazing concept and fun to read story.
Prepare to have your hopes crushed, but never abandoned.
I for one am still reading.

Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed Report
Date: 10/09/19 02:17 am Title: Part 6 - The Day The Clocks Resumed

Please don't stop I live this story I really would luv to know how it properly ends

Reviewer: Mondprinzessin Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 10/08/19 08:37 pm Title: Part 6 - The Day The Clocks Resumed

Hey,

now that we saw a whole lot of new content, that wasn't in the original story, some more feedback of mine. The story ist intriguing and very well layed out. It's nice to read, but it sometimes feels a bit rushed, with one action scene following the other. I think I would have liked more character developement of the MC thorough the story. He isn't reflecting his changes whatsoever. Or maybe it's just the form of narrator putting me of.

But all in all, a very nice story and I can't wait for the final resulotion: Why was storm picked and who was that mysterious lady who started it all?

Cheers and kudos.

Reviewer: Mondprinzessin Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/11/19 08:32 am Title: Prologue

I loved the old story and got really sad when I wanted to reread it one day and couldn't find it anymore.

I'm excited that it is coming back and wondering where the story will go this time.

Keep it up. :)

Reviewer: Fishguy123 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/11/19 08:18 am Title: Prologue

Solid start. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Reviewer: liltiger Signed Report
Date: 08/11/19 05:50 am Title: Prologue

Wait this sounds familiar...

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