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Reviewer: Princevoodoo Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 08/14/19 12:54 pm Title: Magic Wands are Always Magic

Fun story, but it was very hard to read the internal dialog — you need more punctuation and proofreading.

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 02:43 pm Title: Magic Wands are Always Magic

Not bad at all

Author's Response: Thank you, any major criticisms, since this is my first time writing something like this?

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