Reviews For New Salem
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Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/16/19 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 3 Odd Town

Wow! I love it so far, but this chapter feels really short - like almost too short. Did some if it get missed? Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thanks. I do try to make chapters approximately the same length, but occasionally I end up with a short one like this. I could try to pad it out, but I hate doing that. The other alternative is to combine it with another chapter, and I thought the flow of the story would seem a bit contrived if I did. So I feel kind of stuck. I AM trying very hard to avoid this problem in the story I'm currently writing.

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 11:11 am Title: Chapter 2 Job

All very mysterious. I love a good mystery.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 10:23 am Title: Chapter 2 Job

Who’s the wizard or witch.

Author's Response: All of the inhabitants.

Reviewer: junyour Signed Report
Date: 08/11/19 02:45 am Title: Chapter 1 On the Run

Pretty good start. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/10/19 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1 On the Run

As always Casey great start! It’s been awhile so this should be an awesome story.

Author's Response: Thanks. I was one of the ones who was locked out for weeks. I was ready to begin posting this one when things fell apart. Hopefully things will be smooth from here on.

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