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Reviewer: Fishguy123 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/18/20 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whatever happened to this? It seemed fun.

Author's Response: I keep trying to rework it - even tried making it into a game, which I might go back to - but keep getting stuck/being unsatisfied. Still hoping to bring it out into the world, one day.

Reviewer: Fiona Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 11/27/19 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Boudica Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/23/19 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

This first chapter is a fun setup for what looks to be a cute new series, but reading it would be smoother if you broke the paragraphs up a little more and trimmed extra detail. Still, I look forward to more!

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