Reviews For Swarmwear
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Reviewer: Elizabeth Rees Signed Report
Date: 08/17/19 04:38 pm Title: Sex, Love, and Nanobots

Not a bad story I think, though it would have been better with a bit more detail.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/07/19 10:02 pm Title: Sex, Love, and Nanobots

That was a lot of fun. Should continue.

Reviewer: Princevoodoo Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 08/07/19 04:22 pm Title: Sex, Love, and Nanobots

This was a good start. I feel like you got lost (I know I did) in the last part - it was vague about what was going on.

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/02/19 01:05 pm Title: Sex, Love, and Nanobots

Good story. I thought the spanking thing was especially entertaining and could have used more detail. Also, I ended up a bit unclear on exactly what the body suit changed about him, other than boobs. As a suggestion, I'd love to see a sequel in which the nanites actually change the subject completely.

Reviewer: Saklad Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/02/19 02:36 am Title: Sex, Love, and Nanobots

I really like the unconventional story structure, not to mention the relatively unique premise.

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