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Reviewer: Lillove Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/19 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes! My favourite ship!

Reviewer: Lillove Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/07/19 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

The quotation marks have turned into error symbols starting in chapter two. It makes it really hard to read, especially with dyslexia. Could you please fix it when you can? Thank you..

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/01/19 12:43 am Title: Chapter 7

Cute apology Audri ;-) no worries!

Reviewer: TForc Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/28/19 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

Frickin' Checkov's gun! I swear I lost it at that subtle reference ^^

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 07/18/19 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm, I wouldn't mind seeing a part where Leina gives a history of Audrey. It sounds like this goes back a long time.

Reviewer: limelizard Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/16/19 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1

I've been checking every day for more of this story.

Reviewer: Rebecca Scarlet Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/16/19 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Been waiting for this! Thank you so much for continuing the story. I loved the chapter, though am a bit sad to see it through Tiffany's eyes again, just because I love Audrey so much.

I do love that the different PoVs offer such a wide narrative of the events, like what Leina will have to say to Aleah and Tiffany firsthand, so it's kind of a love/still love but not as much relationship.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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