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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/17/19 02:44 pm Title: Thirty Three: Saturday evening

Note for next time l, it's hard to keep all those A names straight especially between updates.

Author's Response: Thanks, good comment, I'd missed that one. Alison, Amelia, and Alysia three totally different Characters. Yes, I agree, although a bit late now, I'll be more careful next time!

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/23/19 08:22 pm Title: One: Chris

Like it but not Alison.

Author's Response: Alison... All will become clearer later, there is a reason as to why.

Reviewer: okieohio Signed Report
Date: 07/23/19 05:51 am Title: One: Chris

The problem in changing back for most of these scifi type changes is usually the mass. Normal the person loses mass become a girl. That can be explained usually. But where does bgg these mass come from to go back?

Author's Response: Oh, good question, Where did it go in the first place, Miranda is good, so is the 'Sippeoc' But, there is an answer later.

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 07/20/19 08:09 pm Title: One: Chris

No, your additions add to it.

Author's Response: Great, thanks for your support.I've just added another chapter.

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/20/19 08:08 pm Title: Twenty Four: Helena and Chris

I see a problem with changing Chris back.

Author's Response: Oh damn, what have I missed?

Reviewer: Stardraigh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/16/19 12:26 am Title: One: Chris

I enjoy this story. Glad you kept on writing it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you do, it is complete, however, written terribly Although slow I'm updating, and releasing better chapters...

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 07/13/19 01:14 am Title: Three: Florence and Alison

Ah, yes, I remember this story. You wrote it before but you have changed it and added to it it seems.

Author's Response: I'm pleased you remember it, yes your right, hopefully, my additions aren't too distracting and I haven't got too carried away.

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