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Reviewer: Shadow Dragon Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/19 05:40 am Title: Little larva

Excellent start! Can't wait to see where this story goes!

Reviewer: Kepli Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/19 04:13 am Title: Little larva

Its very good. A few rough edges but good story on the whole.... With that said im looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Pystar Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/07/19 03:09 am Title: Little larva

Sounds interesting, can't wait to see what the next chapter brings

Reviewer: shadowmaster Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/06/19 11:50 pm Title: Little larva

a strong start with good set up for what could be a great story I love Alexander and hope he stays about.

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