Date: 09/22/19 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start to your story. I feel bad for dad, he didn't do anything intentionally wrong. Plus he sort of redeemed himself with chivalry and kindness towards the old lady. Can't wait to see what Claire wishes for, and whether it will be during a period of calm rational thought, or during some emotional outburst. Either way, they don't know it is magic, so the results will be..... Interesting. Thanks for taking the time to write this story.
Date: 07/07/19 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm super excited about the tags for this story. Nice gut or bad guy I always love it when someone falls accidentally into a situation they didn't plan on and it gets out of control, especially when sex and TG is involved. I can't wait for this guy to accidentally/be forced to become a girl and have his new pussy stuffed and be forced to live his new life.
Date: 07/02/19 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice setup for this tale. Although I relish reading stories where some lout is transformed/body swapped against his will and put through the ringer, it is tough to know that the hammer is going to fall on a nice guy like the protagonist seems to be. That I care enough about the characters to already anticipate the next chapter should be considered praiseworthy. Well done!