Date: 01/23/20 09:55 pm Title: Orientation
Just read all 9 chapters in one go. Love the story line. Your writing is really great. Easy to read and drew me in. The interaction between the girls is really fantastic. It read very genuine to me. Looking forward to more. Thank you.
Date: 01/05/20 06:12 am Title: Social Studies
Wow at the potion lady being nonchalant about Bailey's transformation. She clearly knows this is a thing that goes on, and might know more than she's letting on. Bailey might have just missed her opportunity but she doesn't seem keen on talking so who knows. Also jeez the girls are really grilling her hard. Isn't it bad enough what happened to Bailey, now to tease for literally everything, I mean it' a complete reality shift. I'm guessing since she was straight as a guy she's straight as a girl now? So if she was gay as a guy she'd be a lesbian? Interesting thoughts on that
Date: 01/04/20 03:21 pm Title: Orientation
Wow! I was excited when I saw that you’d posted another chapter. And, doubly so when I found your unique approach to Baylee’s resistance and refusal to introspection and acceptance. I found none of the tired clichés commonly used by many other TG writers. How refreshing.
You should be on Patreon.
Date: 12/19/19 10:03 pm Title: Orientation
On the basis of this one story, you’ve become one of my three favorite authors in the entire TG Fiction genre. You writing style is excellent but better still, the plot in this story pushes all the right buttons for me.
So, it’s been two weeks since you posted chapter 8 and I’m already beginning to experience the pain of withdrawal. Accordingly, I started at chapter 1 and I’ve read through chapter 8 again (like, maybe for the 7th time?). This story gets better every time I read through it. But every time I read it, I get increasingly hungry for more.
Hey, no pressure, though. Good writing happens when it is ready—not before. I’ll just read it again in between episodes of googling for how to land a sales job with Scholar Supply Co.
I can only hope!!
Date: 12/14/19 02:29 am Title: History
Is the school only going after people who don't mind the change? Like people who are either hate their life so much they don't mind going to this school or people who wouldn't miss it? Hell are there any trans girls in the school I wonder? I'm very curious about the prospect of how this works
Date: 12/07/19 03:44 pm Title: Orientation
In Terrigen’s comment it was noted that they(the school) has good intentions. But that doesn’t mean what they are doing is right. Probably because they change people without their permission.
So, I wonder if they’d be interested in volunteers? Of course that wouldn't make for a very cool story. But it would be great for the volunteers.
Author's Response: I think since the school tries to keep quiet about the transformations, it wouldn't be their style to advertise for volunteers, or to openly ask people permission ahead of time. But they most likely have "enrolled" quite a few people who would have volunteered if asked.
Date: 12/06/19 04:37 am Title: Orientation
I'm glad to see an update!
If this school is real, please let me know the address, I need a reset.
Author's Response: If only it were! I envisioned the location as a fictitious city in the Northeastern United States, but I actually did read the website of an girls' school in Toronto Canada before writing the story, which helped give me some ideas.
Date: 12/05/19 08:29 pm Title: History
Always glad to see an update to this story. I’m invested.
Cole does have a point, but I also see where Bayley is coming. The school isn’t just grabbing anyone off of the street, they have good intentions. But that doesn’t mean what they are doing is right.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 11/27/19 06:05 pm Title: Orientation
I was hoping you’d post something further for the holiday, but sadly, nothing yet. Oh well, this story is so nice that I am more than willing to wait until your creativity ripens another chapter. You are a gifted writer, and this story is one of the really good ones IMO. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks for your interest! I'm pleased to say I'm almost done with the new chapter! It's longer than the others. Would have finished it off tonight but I drank a little too much and I can't seem to write well when I'm this buzzed. Quality before speediness! Should be up by end of tomorrow! :D
Date: 11/14/19 03:46 am Title: Orientation
Every trip out of her room, interacting with other students, causes Baylee to come to grips with the realities of her new life. Can't wait till she starts weighing the qualities of that new life against the humdrum, dead-end life of a school supplies salesman.
Date: 11/13/19 12:42 am Title: Fluid Dynamics
I binge read it all just now. Really finding this story funny with the surreal antics of the staff.
Expecting to read more chapters in the future.
Although I say funny but in the actual position of Blake, it would be terrifying, hopefully they really only have his "her" best interests in mind. And also that Baylee now finds herself at home.
Date: 11/08/19 03:00 pm Title: Orientation
This is really a great story. It has the potential of becoming one of my all time favorite TG stories. Discovering that you posted a new chapter was almost like winning the lottery—not that I’d know how that feels. :(
Author's Response: Thank you too! It means a lot to know my story is so likeable. In the beginning I had a silly short story in mind, but I dare say it's become something much more wholesome than I expected. I could totally see carrying this out into a full sized novel. I just hope I don't let it go to my head and let the quality suffer. The hardest part of keeping a good thing going is not really knowing what makes it so good to begin with.
Date: 11/06/19 02:17 pm Title: Orientation
As to the comment regarding Blake/Baylee being a Freshman with no family; the paddling applied by Mrs. Ansvi was stern but not harsh--the kind of punishment a mother might use. Could it be that Baylee will wind up getting from Mrs. Ansvi, the mothering he obviously needs?
Date: 08/29/19 08:44 pm Title: Initiation
Yeah I'm curious about family too, a highschool student, a FRESHMAN without a family? That'd be just sad... is his IRL family gonna be involved also... was the principal right? Like... he seems to really be looking forward to this and having a good experience. I know I'd not like it because I love my honey but if I wasn't with my hunnie a chance to go through a not trash highschool that everyone hates me and makes fun of me for being "effiminate" and going through middleschool; and elementary school being beat up all the time wasn't fun...
People tell me how fun highschool was and I just... think they are lying? Because school was HELL, I mean I'm a trans girl so that's probably why but... UGH it was a nightmare! Also how in the world is the school going to hide the fact a man went to their school, then suddenly disappeared after driving to that school? I mean I know it's easy to hide but how are they gonna stop the police from showing up and asking where he was? Unless no one cares about him I'm guessing.
Date: 08/23/19 02:38 pm Title: Physical Education
"if Mrs Ansvi thought he was going to blindly go along with this, she'd better think again."
Heh, so oblivious. I'm sure he has no idea what website his story has been published on...
Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next installment!
Date: 08/23/19 02:27 pm Title: Physical Education
"UNGRATEFUL!?! RUDE!?!! Fuck you, Rachel!"
Fitting right in as a teenage girl, I see.
I have one, I know.
Author's Response: This comment brought a smile to my face. I haven't had much interaction with teen girls in awhile (I'm 28 now), so I wasn't even really trying to make Blake act like a teen girl, but now it occurs to me that he was, which works perfectly! :D
Date: 08/23/19 02:25 pm Title: Physical Education
"Aww, come here, you," Mrs Ansvi hugged him. He hugged her back. It was weird but also comforting. He hadn't hugged anyone in ages. And certainly nobody had hugged him in ages."
Hugging, an often-overlooked component of erotica. Also aftercare, another frequently-overlooked component of erotica. First you tell your sub what she did wrong, then you spank her, then you hug her and let her know you love her.
Very nice. You've done your homework. I'm impressed. I was especially impressed by "... certainly nobody had hugged him in ages." It's the bottom-of-the-ninth-home-run of sexuality. Simple loving physical comfort with no demands... Victory.
Date: 08/23/19 02:17 pm Title: Physical Education
"Mrs. Ansvi held his upper body down with one hand and whacked him hard on his naked bottom with the other hand."
Fan service. Thanks!
I feel like Baylee is going to need a lot more spankings before she is fully-acclimatized to her new identity.
Date: 07/17/19 06:32 am Title: Physical Education
Well then... that's unexpected. Please tell me at least SOME of those "male" students were trans or something. Like you could help sooo many Trans girls with this. It'd be like a dream come true and you wouldn't have to worry about someone fighting you tooth and nail.
Author's Response: I'd like to think a number of the "men turned girl" students were actually trans women in denial before the school took them in, seeing as how the principal explains that most of them eventually appreciate it, and given how she tends to select young men who seem unhappy in life. Also it's possible some of the "women turned girl" students and traditionally enrolled girls were openly living as trans females before the school turned them into cisgender girls and took them in, probably to their great satisfaction. But I'm also going to acknowledge that a portion of the students had no desire whatsoever to be turned into schoolgirls, because life's not fair and the school doesn't always hand pick the right people. Oops!
Date: 07/04/19 11:31 am Title: Enrollment
This story is funny and weird, I'm enjoying it a lot. The staff are all so overbearing, I was almost expecting him to get a spanking or something for not having his hall pass. I guess that will have to wait until after they turn him into a girl (which I assume is coming up).
Are going to go for a sudden change, or a gradual, unnoticed change as he makes his/her way through her class schedule? I don't know how you have this planned out, but I thought it would be fun and interesting if he slowly ended up female and in uniform bit by bit by the end of the day. "Oh, I spilled coffee on your jacket, I'm so sorry, Sweetie. Here, just wear this one so you'll be ready for your next class." "Oh, Honey, those shoes are really much too big, here, wear these."
Anyway, good start, interesting premise, I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with this.
Date: 07/03/19 01:12 am Title: Enrollment
It's interesting so far. The principal seems awfully enthusiastic, so you may want to go into a bit of detail as to exactly why she is in a later chapter.
It has a slow build-up, but that's fine. Slow is good because it's more satisfying to read.