Date: 12/09/19 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 10: The One Who Feasts
Wow, that was intense. I feel really bad for Jesse, it seems like she is going to have a rough time adjusting. I still want to know what those women are exactly. Like, I know they were cursed, but what Jesse did in this chapter shouldn't be possible.
Date: 10/13/19 02:52 am Title: Chapter 9: Sensations
Thank you for this long (or at least) growing and intriguing story. Somehow I'm not surprised at what transpired and how the protag got changed, but it's still enjoyable to follow and I like your first-person exposition of the experience. Now personally the becoming-female part is most interesting to me, and I can take or leave the pregnancy part, but I do hope you'll continue to unfold more of the background, context, and what happens in the longer run.
Date: 07/30/19 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Warmth and the Chill
Your such tease! Stopping right before the tf becomes evident.
Author's Response: I tried to make the setup and transformation separate so I could focus on both. Next chapter has been finished and submitted. Just waiting for it to go live!
Date: 07/30/19 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Warmth and the Chill
I really hope the next chapter can come out soon. I've been dying to find out what is going on.
Author's Response: I finished it today and uploaded it. Should be up sometime rockfish hopefully? There's a delay in posting.
Date: 07/07/19 10:18 am Title: Chapter 5: Cool Waters
You know, for a second there while she was nuzzling his neck I thought they were some kind of pregnant vampires. I'm so looking forward to knowing what happened and why they all stare off into space and what they all are. I assume that will be after the tf though.
Super excited for the next chapter. I hope it doesn't need to take as long as this one, but if it does it'll be worth the wait.
Date: 06/25/19 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Warm Waters
I cannot wait until it gets to the transformation. Not that I don't love this exposition, I just have questions that need answers and I feel like the transformation will be the shift in action that lifts the mystery.
Date: 06/24/19 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 3: The Gym Incident
Well I'm invested as hell in this story. My mind is going to either a coven or a harem for why they refer to eachother as sisters and their caretaker as Mother.
Author's Response: I won't spoil anything, but when the transformation happens, you'll find out shortly thereafter what exactly is going on! Thanks for the review!