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Reviewer: IshAsh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/24/19 03:20 am Title: The Cursed Collar

It is a pity that you do not dabble much in short stories or bimbo tales because this was superb! I would love to see you do more like this!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I've got a few more in this genre in the pipeline, but they only take up maybe 10% of my output. If you liked this, check out my other stuff - it's usually longer and less one-dimensional, but my longer stuff contains at least some similar themes.

Reviewer: Mrng Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/23/19 01:30 am Title: The Cursed Collar

Fantastic idea! Sure we’ve had curse objects but to to have the protagonist struggle against it, futilely, gives this genre some very welcomed spice. Thank you for giving this brilliant story to us!

Author's Response: My pleasure! I'm glad you lied it!

Reviewer: scottkuma Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/22/19 11:16 am Title: The Cursed Collar

A fun little romp, focused on the transformation. I really liked the bimboification aspects of it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Lockshockbear Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/21/19 06:53 pm Title: The Cursed Collar

This was great! Hit almost all the right buttons for what I want from a story on this site, and I would love to see more!

I'm unfamiliar with your other, longer work, but I personally would love to see more of this type, maybe spread out to a few chapters or a shared universe? Either way, you're a great writer and I'll definitely be on the lookout for more!

Author's Response: I've got some longer works in the pipeline - finished and just in need of minor touch-ups. Keep an eye out for them here - I'll be posting a few chapters this weekend! I don't usually have MC's as bimbos, but it's a recurring theme (right buttons and all). Thanks for the input!

Reviewer: Lady Yuki Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/21/19 12:41 pm Title: The Cursed Collar

I really liked this story. It was a fun short. I am left with the question of who did this to her and how and why as that really never gets addressed.

I think this could be a fun series where cursed objects (or maybe collars) end up on various people for various reasons. You could have a Neko Curse, a Maid Curse, a Slave Curse, a Cabana Boy Curse, another Bimbo Curse (cuz gods knows there are a million ways to spin Bimbos).

It could be interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks! I don't have immediate plans for a sequel / series, but it could be interesting. I like the ideas you've suggested here - maybe I'll get around to more. And, of course, anybody who wants to is welcome to write their own spin-offs. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/21/19 03:19 am Title: The Cursed Collar

Nice little story to fit in between all the longer ones. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: My pleasure! Thanks for the feedback!

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