Reviews For Noi
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Reviewer: Ravenholm Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/25/19 04:44 am Title: Noi

If this drink were ever truly real I would down the entire bottle just so I could be my beautiful female self

Author's Response: So would I. In a heartbeat.

Reviewer: Tessarion Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/20/19 06:47 pm Title: Noi

Cute little story, if a little skimpy on the details.

Life would certainly be easier if Noi existed- although, it's worth noting that a lot of the changes (formation of actual mammary glands, reducing in shoe size and (sometimes) height), changes in facial contours, development of hips and curves, reduction in body hair, etc) *can* be achieved through hormone replacement therapy. It's just slower.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I intended this to be short on details. I literally woke up out of a dead sleep and jumped to my chair to write this late one night because the idea just popped in there. Some of my best writing so far has been short and to the point. I think I might stick with that from now on until I get more seasoned as a writer. As for the changes hormone replacement does, that's something I know all about because I have done my research for a potential transition myself in the future.

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