Oh my god that is one hot chapter. I wish I was her.
A somewhat different concept. Wish it were real.
I'm really liking this so far. Keep it up.
I really like the direction that this story is going. Looking forward to more.Author's Response: Thank you
Loving the story so far. Keep up the great work.Author's Response: Thank you
Love the story, keep going.Author's Response: Thank you
Great chapter and what a neat surprise for her.
Wow this is getting good. I just want to know what happens. Love it
OMG! I love the surprise! Can't wait for more.
Sorry, I meant 3rd grade and you can't edit. Grrrr.Author's Response: Oh oops I'll edit it. Thank you. Glad your enjoying it :-)
I am loving this story. Only one thing, 8 year olds would be in 4th grade.I love Robyn, can't wait to see what the surprise is.
It's different to your other stories but I'm loving it. I really like the character of Robyn. Awesome!!!!
Wow this is getting good. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great work.
I'm really loving Robyn and her story! Please, keep writing - you're doing fantastic!
Excellent chapter,this story is growing on me.Author's Response: Thank you. Gotta admit reviews certainly make me want to keep writing.
Getting interesting. Keep up the good work.
I love your work, you are the best, keep on writing.
Wow cool story. I'm interested to see what happens to Robyn in the club.
Lovin it. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see where this all goes
Ewww its getting really interesting. Great work.
I like how its started. Robyn sounds like she is going to be an interesting character. Keep it up
Cool start. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Lovely to have you writing again.
A nice start.Some more markers to denote scene changes and time skips would be helpful.
Great start,looking forward to seeing more.