Date: 10/25/19 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haven’t commented on this story so far, but after a slight dip it has really picked up again. Very interesting premise, well developed. Hope all’s well with you and yours, Nicole.
Author's Response: Hi Rob lovely to hear from you. Slight dip what do you mean lol? We are well and enjoying life hope you are too.
Date: 10/25/19 03:50 am Title: Chapter 21
It will be important for her to remember, I think, that she does not owe Steve anything for saving her; I know if I were in her situation ( and I pray I never am), I know I might assume that I owe my savior a relationship.
Author's Response: Thank you I appreciate that.
Date: 10/14/19 12:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Glad to have you back! I suspect that the doctor’s claim that the transplanted womb would be rejected and turn septic is not entirely true. I don’t trust her. Also, I don’t understand why Robyn decided to continue working as a prostitute even after she mentioned wanting to quit. Does she really need the money that badly?
Author's Response: Hi I'll try to address all that in the next chapter or two. Thanks ÷)
Date: 09/16/19 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
I am pretty sure that any contract that any contract that requires that someone give up their baby would be thrown out by the court if this becomes a legal battle. It also strikes me as shady that they would want to take the baby from her in the first place, since presumably it would be easier (not to mention cheaper) to simply have Robyn raise the baby and than have her bring the baby in for testing once a month or something. This, coupled with the fact that they ended up threatening her family, leads me to believe that either: a.) the testing they wish to perform on the baby are the kind that require human experimentation, dissection or vivisection, b.) there is something special about any potential baby that Robyn has that makes them desire to control said baby (perhaps the baby would have gene that makes them immune to a deadly disease?) or c.) the company is both evil and possessed of a stupidly bad PR department ( I mean seriously? In addition to the potential of lawsuit, the legal issues stemming from whether a someone can be contractually mandated to hand over their child, the legal issues stemming from whether someone can be contractually obligated to have children, there is the fact that the moment the public hears “company is trying to take mothers firstborn child from her”, there would be an outcry. And considering how hard it is to take custody of a child away from a mother normally, I have to ask, was the entire company public relations team sniffing paint when they signed off on this? This is the kind of thing that permanently tarnishes a companies image. Basically, Robyn should be calling an attorney and the police right the fuck now! I apologize for the long-winded rant, and will shut up now.
Author's Response: Omg I love love love this, it is such a compliment that you have invested in my story, thank you, I love you!!!!
Date: 09/10/19 01:53 am Title: Chapter 14
I have a bad feeling about this... nothing wrong with being a prostitute per se, but I feel Angela is unknowingly taking advantage of Robyn’s current vulnerability.
Author's Response: Don't worry I like to give my heroines challenges to overcome but they always win.