Reviews For Robyn
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Reviewer: Satin and Lace Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/23/19 12:33 am Title: Chapter 10

Oh my god that is one hot chapter. I wish I was her.

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 08/21/19 02:53 am Title: Chapter 1

A somewhat different concept. Wish it were real.

Reviewer: Cali_Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/19 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm really liking this so far. Keep it up.

Reviewer: AlexaTiresias Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/19 04:15 am Title: Chapter 8

I really like the direction that this story is going. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Satin and Lace Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/19/19 02:44 am Title: Chapter 8

Loving the story so far. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 08/19/19 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the story, keep going.

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Cali_Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 04:10 am Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter and what a neat surprise for her.

Reviewer: Kiwi Princess Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 03:44 am Title: Chapter 7

Wow this is getting good. I just want to know what happens. Love it

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/13/19 02:51 am Title: Chapter 7

OMG! I love the surprise! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 08/12/19 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

Sorry, I meant 3rd grade and you can't edit. Grrrr.

Author's Response: Oh oops I'll edit it. Thank you. Glad your enjoying it :-)

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/12/19 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 6

I am loving this story. Only one thing, 8 year olds would be in 4th grade.
I love Robyn, can't wait to see what the surprise is.

Reviewer: Satin and Lace Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/12/19 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

It's different to your other stories but I'm loving it. I really like the character of Robyn. Awesome!!!!

Reviewer: Cali_Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/12/19 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 6

Wow this is getting good. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Kathryn Mayhew Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/12/19 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm really loving Robyn and her story! Please, keep writing - you're doing fantastic!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 08/09/19 11:05 am Title: Chapter 5

Excellent chapter,this story is growing on me.

Author's Response: Thank you. Gotta admit reviews certainly make me want to keep writing.

Reviewer: Satin and Lace Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/17/19 06:39 am Title: Chapter 4

Getting interesting. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 06/14/19 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love your work, you are the best, keep on writing.

Reviewer: Kiwi Princess Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/14/19 01:19 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow cool story. I'm interested to see what happens to Robyn in the club.

Reviewer: Satin and Lace Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/13/19 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

Lovin it. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see where this all goes

Reviewer: Cali_Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/13/19 04:03 am Title: Chapter 2

Ewww its getting really interesting. Great work.

Reviewer: Cali_Girl Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/12/19 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like how its started. Robyn sounds like she is going to be an interesting character. Keep it up

Reviewer: Satin and Lace Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/12/19 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cool start. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Lovely to have you writing again.

Reviewer: Eryssel Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/12/19 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

A nice start.

Some more markers to denote scene changes and time skips would be helpful.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/12/19 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start,looking forward to seeing more.

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