Reviews For What a Day
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Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 06/18/19 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

Interesting! Different concept.

Reviewer: Qwriter Signed Report
Date: 06/11/19 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

I just wish he turned taller (5'2" seems like a midget...how about 5'8" to 6'?) and bustier (how about F to J?). How are the new measurements? 34-24-36?

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/19 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

White top with a pink bra? That's a little weird, maybe the top is changing to pink or something, otherwise it'd broadcast to the world.

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/19 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

Hmmm

Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/19 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

Great start, I can’t wait to read more.

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