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Reviewer: IshAsh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/28/19 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Choice

A fun read so far! I do hope Kali continues to fight back...it's more fun when they struggle. Note to author: You are using "roll" in circumstances where you meant to use "role."

Reviewer: Lady Yuki Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/27/19 01:14 am Title: Chapter 5: Following Orders

I really hope this one is continued soon. I'm loving this story, but I'm curious to find out exactly what the last few changes to Kali have been and how all of this can lead her to a life without work.

Reviewer: CilanE Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/18/19 10:51 am Title: Chapter 4: Pleasure

Can't wait for this to continue

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 06/18/19 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

Interesting! Different concept.

Reviewer: Qwriter Signed Report
Date: 06/11/19 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

I just wish he turned taller (5'2" seems like a midget...how about 5'8" to 6'?) and bustier (how about F to J?). How are the new measurements? 34-24-36?

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/19 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

White top with a pink bra? That's a little weird, maybe the top is changing to pink or something, otherwise it'd broadcast to the world.

Reviewer: Grabber_blue_5oh Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/19 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

Hmmm

Reviewer: Faye Kistry Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/07/19 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: So it begins

Great start, I can’t wait to read more.

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