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Reviewer: LunarQueen Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/16/19 07:04 am Title: I was hired to herd a bunch of sheep while the farmers were gone but I didn't know I would end up as one

Nothing exceptional. The story idea itself is pretty good all things considered, and sheep girls are cute. The major issue is with the prose, which is bland, making it all to easy for the eyes to slip over it. Still, nothing stands out as egregiously wrong.

Reviewer: Jakylorhide Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/31/19 01:30 am Title: I was hired to herd a bunch of sheep while the farmers were gone but I didn't know I would end up as one

Dawww! Super cute little short! Some minor editing would help in places but I love it so much :) thebfaxt Robin was there before was a great addition.

Reviewer: Katie-the-Angel-Witch Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/30/19 06:54 pm Title: I was hired to herd a bunch of sheep while the farmers were gone but I didn't know I would end up as one

A good little short one and cute idea, and a solid base idea for an entire collection of short stories of folks changing on the farm. A bit fast paced, but that's okay, makes it fun and a good read.

And I am not just saying that because the author is my wife and I helped her with brainstorming

Reviewer: Trismegistus Shandy Signed Report
Date: 05/30/19 04:02 pm Title: I was hired to herd a bunch of sheep while the farmers were gone but I didn't know I would end up as one

This was really cute. I noticed a few places where you suddenly switch into first person for a sentence and then back to first person, though, and a few random switches into present tense. If you'd like a native English speaker to proofread your work, send me a message.

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