Reviews For Body and Soul
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Reviewer: Rushica Signed Report
Date: 05/30/19 06:37 pm Title: Body and Soul

Please post the first chapter too so we can see how things get started.

Reviewer: 930310 Signed Report
Date: 05/30/19 02:26 am Title: Body and Soul

YOLO, Mike, YOLO...

Reviewer: Terrigen Signed Report
Date: 05/29/19 10:31 pm Title: Body and Soul

Why did you start with the second chapter? I stopped reading because we are dropped in the middle of the story without context.

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