Date: 07/14/19 05:54 am Title: Chapter 16: Raging Rangie
This is amazing chapter and although Miura is not responsible directly but she is a culprit for that operation. She will be a indirect threat to them I believe so if they cut ties with her I wouldn't be surprised. Thank you for sharing this
Date: 07/04/19 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 15: Damn Van
Is it me or is Cy have a little bit of feeling toward Bridget... ? O///O
Also oh gosh please Miura stay safe
Sierra and the other words are facts they should lay low and Miura is the one that fucked up sadly... they should play it safe ...that plainly logical in their situation!
Let's hope everything gonna be fine for them ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews Luna! I'll correct the typos soon!
Date: 07/04/19 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 13: Ram Raid
into the try like it wasn’t even there.
“Bridget….what was that?” I ask, the entire conversation leaving me confused.
Sorry another typo: it is tree not try ^^
Thanks for the chapter Rare!
Also Oh gosh poor Non.... ;-;
Date: 07/04/19 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 12: No Control
“What are how powers specifically” Goff takes back the reins of the interrogation.
“The only thing I know is that she can control machines”
Should it not be her and not how?
Also poor Miura, and Yeah crossover with Katie and oh gosh sierra let me hug you ;-;
Date: 07/04/19 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: Night Fever
Oh, look like the xenophobe colonel use a 'hero' ... and is it me or Victoria as no fucking moral for others life? Don't know why ... I simply hate her right now!
And one family of God fanatic, one!
Seriously, people freak out for a stupid reason... I have a gut feeling that if they didn't act in ... A girl and a mother would have died for blinded faith.
Thanks for the chapter Rare!
Date: 07/04/19 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: Stormbringer
Look like the army decided to say fuck the human right your emerged then you now, monster, and weapon for us to tame... nothing more than lowly beast..... wow didn't think there people that could go and become much worse your sure, most human and in that most of that army did not emerge as dummy and lower body back hole?
Also, rip Cynthia..... We all know guilt gonna consume her what Miura did is a good thing....
Thanks, for the chapter ^^
Date: 07/04/19 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 2: Burning Up the Night
Oooooh, look like he got some power about the control of car... or mechanic.... maybe even technology...?
I don't really understand her power right now, but look like she didn't understand that the patrolman got terribly hurt... let's hope it doesn't fall in her mind soon...
Also is she in trouble...
Thanks for the chapter
Date: 07/04/19 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: Frontal Impact
Oh gosh poor, Cyrus.... look live once again someone with a lot of talent and a kind soul got sadly throw out after is prejudged finished utility, Fuck I hate the company that only think about money without caring about their employe.... only seeing them as a tool or disposable step to get higher.
Also, look like she got hit by fate too
Date: 06/14/19 04:35 am Title: Chapter 2: Burning Up the Night
Your tenses are inconsistent. Pick either past or present tense and stick with it. If you don't have an editor, try reading your material out loud to yourself. It's surprising the amount of stuff you can catch that way
Date: 06/09/19 02:50 am Title: Chapter 12: No Control
Ohmigod, the fabulous Kammiverse has rapidly inflated (groan) to more parallel, interwoven threads than I can even track! But I enjoy new chapters in all of them, especially this one.
Hoping you don't leave us mystified about the purpose of the metal arm, if it has one. Seems rather... asymmetric, where the antennae and the rest make some sense.
Date: 05/14/19 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Stop to Give Up
Surprised everyone is so calm about this. Looking forward to seeing what happens next. Will be cool if she can drive her car remotely. And make tons of cool robots.
Author's Response: Haha. Well to be fair Cy basically has a panic attack when she first meets Miura and the Emergence happens in the dead of night. I'm kinda tapping into that wartime kinda spirit we had when being assaulted by bombs. Life gotta go on ya know? Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 05/13/19 12:10 am Title: Chapter 1: Frontal Impact
Holding off on giving this a rating as of yet. The chapters were kind of short and it hasn't really grabbed me so far. Will wait to see more.
That being said, I'm interested in the cyborg and aspie aspects, see if that goes anywhere.
Date: 05/12/19 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 2: Burning Up the Night
Awwww shiiiiit what happens next?? Your chapters go by fast and I wish we got to spend a little more time in the world. I'm immediately interested in what is happening in England and I can't wait to see what else comes from these changes. Great start!