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Reviewer: Taxouck Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/11/19 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Well, if Veronica managed to force herself in, why can't Jason do that right back at her? A struggle for control is much more interesting when there's actually a struggle going on after all :p

Author's Response: I don't think I even thought of that when I was writing, but I agree. Maybe we'll just say her control is too overwhelming to wrestle away.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/11/19 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I do wish you would consider a 2nd chapter. There's so much for Veronica to do with her borrowed body.
Well, even if this is the end, it was a great story. Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: Thanks. c: I had a good bit planned out that would have shown Veronica experiencing being alive again, but then I realized I couldn't actually fit all that into one short story. Not without making it ungodly long, anyway. Ah well.

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/11/19 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1

YIKES she's super evil and probably not going to give him his body back. There's got to be some kind of people or ghost busters that have dealt with this and can help him or something. I mean he might be stuck looking like her but at least he c an get rid of that evil woman...

Author's Response: Veronica's...not a very nice person. I think she could do with getting sucked into one of those ghost traps, yeah. Oh well! At least Jason didn't die in the process of being forced out of his own body. Bit of a Malkovich thing going on there.

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