Date: 08/11/19 04:41 am Title: The Bottom Line
I'm really proud of you Feli. Just, really really proud of you for finishing this lovely story. It is heartfelt and hits some good points and I'm glad I got to read it. And I'm sure it will help some people go "wait a minute."
Date: 05/13/19 01:08 pm Title: Not the smartest of plans
You seem like you are leaning towards writing an epilogue...
Follow your instincts,
especially if you already have something in mind.
Perhaps you can then work on an outline for a sequel that opens with a prologue a few months down the road,
as you feel inspired.
You can then work that one at a different pace when you are ready to resume and just let everyone know how you feel about the potential pace of progress-
Whatever that pace may or may not be.
It’s really up to you-
you’re a free writer,
not an employee.
It’s nice that you care about your readers but your creativity shouldn’t suffer because of deadlines that don’t exist.
Enjoy your freedom and express yourself thusly!
Date: 05/12/19 03:11 pm Title: Anxieties in the air
Well that didn't go the worst it could have gone, definitely didn't go as good as it could have gone either though. Still Snake has learned to be a better person.
Author's Response: I mean, by bully standards, it almost went unrealistically well if you'd ask me. But I'm also hyper critical of everything I write, so :p
Date: 05/11/19 07:34 am Title: Where we stand now
This is so cute, how did I miss this? Oooh I wonder what snake's name will be? Will she be a girl called Snake? That'd be interesting. Also her old "Friends" how are they going to handle their boss being a nice sweet girl instead of a jerk manipulative creep?
And is Lucille gonna have to adopt them both? That'd be so cute!
Author's Response: hehehe, thank you for liking this story <3
Date: 05/10/19 07:44 pm Title: An occasion for learning
Lucille is going to help smooth things over with the parents - great! But what can she do about Dean and Lukas?
Author's Response: She did say family *and friends*. The flasks she gave the girls are full enough for a few uses each! Also, bit of a spoiler, but I'm much more interested in detailing what will happen with Dean and Lukas than with their parents :p
Date: 05/10/19 06:44 pm Title: An occasion for learning
I really like Lucille, reminds of one of my teachers from school with her attitude and the way she acts. Also a very wholesome experience between all the characters, cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you~ Lucille is a good person.
Date: 05/09/19 02:36 pm Title: Not the smartest of plans
I LOVE this premise. I'd always wondered why there weren't more TG-style stories about people who MENTALLY were turned into girls, because as proven here, it can be just as cute and wholesome. Look forward to seeing where you take this!
Author's Response: <3
Date: 05/09/19 01:40 pm Title: Someone like me
Great way to turn our expectations of "gender change potion." Also, I love stories where girls get to transition/transform together.
And I see there is one dose of the precious potion left - I trust we'll get to see that put to good use!
Author's Response: Well... Why was that potion even made for in the first place?
Date: 05/09/19 08:16 am Title: Not the smartest of plans
Very original twist. Inspired even. I want more please. Now would be good.
Author's Response: Now now, I can't go through my whole stock of chapters at once, otherwise what would be the point of having one in the first place :p Trust me, the pace of uploading will be quick enough already!
Date: 05/09/19 06:56 am Title: Not the smartest of plans
I was hesitant to give this story a read, and I'm so glad that I just did! I love it, what I've read so far, and now I'm definitely invested in the story!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kinds words E>
Date: 05/08/19 02:20 pm Title: The mix-up
Oooo i like alchemy base storys, adds a small blend of science to to world of magic. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response: Alchemy is definitely my favorite kind of magic. It makes it feel tangible, like something you can genuinely experiment with by switching an ingredient or two, instead of slightly differently flicking your wrist.