Date: 05/09/19 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm guessing this is written on site then posted immediately? If so then some suggestions. Please remember to add some paragraphs in between different dialogue/transitions.
Also typically notes/questions are usually added as end of chapter notes and not chapters, but I find it interesting since it allows for more direct discussion on a topic rather than getting a mix of comments about the chapter and the question/note, though I suggest deleting them once the story is completed.
Date: 05/09/19 01:13 am Title: Chapter 8
Female, unless he was homosexual prior to the operation. I haven't seen anything done to mess with his mind beyond the machine he escaped from so I don't think his sexuality should change. So my vote really is to just keep their sexuality the same from pre and post operation, I'm just assuming that he was heterosexual.