Reviews For Michael's heritage
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Reviewer: wolfgaurd1 Signed Report
Date: 05/13/19 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 8

Definitely a woman.

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/12/19 11:30 am Title: Chapter 8

I think this story has a lot of potential. You've got a plot hole big enough to drive a truck through, though - no way the Evil Doctor wouldn't recognize her earlier work.

Reviewer: Madway Signed Report
Date: 05/09/19 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm guessing this is written on site then posted immediately? If so then some suggestions. Please remember to add some paragraphs in between different dialogue/transitions.

Also typically notes/questions are usually added as end of chapter notes and not chapters, but I find it interesting since it allows for more direct discussion on a topic rather than getting a mix of comments about the chapter and the question/note, though I suggest deleting them once the story is completed.

Reviewer: Funtime60 Signed Report
Date: 05/09/19 01:13 am Title: Chapter 8

Female, unless he was homosexual prior to the operation. I haven't seen anything done to mess with his mind beyond the machine he escaped from so I don't think his sexuality should change. So my vote really is to just keep their sexuality the same from pre and post operation, I'm just assuming that he was heterosexual.

Reviewer: LinZelia Signed Report
Date: 05/08/19 03:19 am Title: Chapter 8

why not both man and woman or better yet why not zoidberg

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