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Reviewer: Trismegistus Shandy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 09/07/19 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 7

This was a very good story, with strong plot and characterization and few or no typos. I enjoyed it a lot and look forward to reading more of your work someday.

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/29/19 03:36 am Title: Chapter 7

What complete fun! Nicely done. You could have easily expanded this by introducing the characters a bit more thoroughly but that's a choice, not a critique.

Reviewer: Quintilianus Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/12/19 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1

That got pretty eff'n tense at times, I swear. Made the payoff feel all the more worth it. I'm glad you went through with a happy ending, but didn't just give them an easy out either.

Reviewer: Rks Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/10/19 10:44 am Title: Chapter 1

I loved your writing, ended up reading the whole story in one sitting, which I was not expecting to do.
I’m look forward to reading more from you.

Reviewer: Shadowgale Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/05/19 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved the story. It was a wonderful read.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Rees Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/04/19 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice story.

Reviewer: Bmyself Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/03/19 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Simply wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: storylovinggamer Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/03/19 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

A lovely story! Perfect level of detail, and a nice gesture of emotion from the characters. I love spells r us and magic shop series and spinoffs.

Reviewer: Rose Gibson Signed Report
Date: 05/03/19 03:18 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh I was so hoping that we would see Emily and Erin's relationship develop and find out slowly how the "villians" dealt with the consequences of their actions. What a fantastic build I would love to hear l the details including the explanation when Erin got home. Please reconsider as your writing is quite lovely.

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