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Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed Report
Date: 05/13/19 12:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Some good, in-depth character building, but not enough plot yet to hang a rating on. That being said, not a fan of post-apocalyptic scenarios. Hopefully the protagonist and his sister are able to make it to a zone where life at least resembles normalcy.

Reviewer: Wispy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/11/19 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

moar!

Reviewer: Shadow Dragon Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/19 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1

I like it. Your writing seems pretty good to me, and I'm already interested in seeing where this story goes. Good job! :)

Reviewer: Vessace Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/19 03:03 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm really liking the imagery here. I can't wait to see what comes next!

Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/02/19 02:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting, Im looking forward to how things develop from here.

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