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Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/31/19 01:48 am Title: Chapter 7: Day seven

Thanks!

Reviewer: ZZChromosome Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 05/12/19 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1: Day one

“I cannot fucking believe you. I should have you arrested or killed or something." Yeah, I'm not understanding why she just doesn't kill him once the hypnotic trigger is gone. Made no sense.

Reviewer: frugalberrypie Signed starstar Report
Date: 05/02/19 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Day one

I know this is a porn story; but you must add "Non-Consentual Sex" to the tag list. Because when they come to write the dictionary definition for "rape" there's going to be a link to this story with a note that says "The author didn't think this was rape, but it was, it was rape over and over again, rape after horrifying rape with the added bonus of a non-consensual happy ever after with rapes until the end of time". A deeply dark story that doesn't understand how aweful the ending really is.

Reviewer: Terrigen Signed starstarstar Report
Date: 04/30/19 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 7: Day seven

This is a horror story. I kept waiting for the payback, but the bad guy wins. Even with the hypnotic suggestion on day 6, he still is destroying his friend’s life. I could see that if Brian was a terrible person to begin with, but we don’t see that. It’s a very dark story with a downer for an ending.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/30/19 05:53 am Title: Chapter 7: Day seven

Wow, you really put a lot of thought into how this story would play out. Great job with everything. The story was great, the pacing was great, all of it. Wish those potions actually existed. Thanks.

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