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Reviewer: Quintilianus Signed Report
Date: 04/15/20 01:40 am Title: Totally not a harem anime outfit.

This was a lot of fun! And I love the thoughtful aftercare. Makes me really envious of Maria right now because I would kill for a loving relationship like this.

Author's Response: I am also firmly in the camp of "would do heinous things for that love"

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/23/20 01:24 am Title: Totally not a harem anime outfit.

Interesting story. Pretty deep emotionally and intellectually.

I don't know what rules the girls have to follow, but perhaps Maria could mold Alice into whatever shape she wants for a little role reversal? Trust is a two-way street.

Very creative and imaginative. Your descriptions are very vivid and detailed. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response: thanks so much for reading! lol, i'm sure if Maria had the slightest grasp of magic she would turn Alice into a housecat for a day. Or perhaps even request her cliche big tiddie goth GF as turnabout. I'm so glad you enjoyed it though, thanks for leaving me your thoughts! it's always encouraging to receive such praise.

Reviewer: Shadowgale Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/26/19 10:07 pm Title: Totally not a harem anime outfit.

It was a quick read. A good quick read.

Reviewer: Rylune Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/25/19 04:07 pm Title: Here we hecking go

Smut with a big heart is my kind of smut. I would love to read more about these two.

Author's Response: I do enjoy writing it too :)
since this is marked complete i cant add to it. Everything i tried to continue this ended up just being more of the same as far as sex went. With Maria being a nearly-out trans girl to start i didnt leave a phenomenal amount of space for the good fluff afterwards since she sorta reaches a destination immediately rather than embarking on a journey so to speak. If you havent read Latent Desires, it shares a bit of resemblance in smut minus the outright bondage and visceral transformation. Otherwise thanks so much for reading and ill try to be back with more lovey-dovey smut before too terribly long.

Reviewer: Boudica Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/19/19 04:19 pm Title: Here we hecking go

A lovely little tale!

Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thanks for reading 😀

Reviewer: DerbyGhost Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/18/19 01:58 am Title: Here we hecking go

Endearing, heartwarming, smutty fluff. My favorite kind of smut. This feels like a warm hug and a handjob all in one. Please keep adding on to this story.

Author's Response: Im imagining a warm hug with a handjob involved and OOOF. Ill get that second part up before too long. Its hard to say if there could or should be a third.

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