Date: 07/04/19 02:11 pm Title: Road Trip!
This was the best f-word chapter you have made so far... I just wish I could have been near that pope to see its reaction,seeing Bridget stand while is soldier kneeled and the fact that is believe got destroyed in its face. Literally it was incredible. Also Clark is such a nice guy b25;
Thanks for the amazing chapter Katie!
Date: 07/04/19 02:03 pm Title: KNOCK KNOCK MOUSE GONNA GIVE IT TO YA
Yeah, last chapter and the fairy are really scaring me.... magic not only have good in it, and if it come back there could be some really big trouble and disasters
Also... they fucking saved Non, will bridget keep them
Oh gosh, now they gonna get Bridget 'mom', payback
Date: 07/04/19 01:53 pm Title: Ol Jeezy would be rolling in his grave if he was there
Oh gosh... Bridget mom have become worst then in the past it is literraly scary... also rest in peace for the pop statue the new one is better :3
Dickhead deserve something related right ?
Date: 07/04/19 01:50 pm Title: The First Time
That chapter is so fucking emotionaaaal....
Bridget safety line from her crazy mother.... got destroyed and cut.... That grandpa looked so understanding, kind and fiable too ;-; I think this chapter is the most heavy yet....
And her 'mom'..... what the heck Woman your daughter is hurt by her lost and you find a way to hurt her more ...can you not simply shut up, cause she certainly didnt need that and also stop being a religiously fucked up person... not even a mom ... you lost that title a long time ago!
Date: 07/04/19 01:45 pm Title: Public Speaking Class
Oh gosh yes yes yes, look like Bridget is in mom and teaching mode b25;, and she craked egg hehe... look like bridget is also an amazing girl, that is sweet and loving b25; and that teach as much as you do Katie
Date: 07/04/19 01:37 pm Title: Saved by the Bell
Oh god... im so fucming happy 眼rka gived those guy a lesson, and that the girl look quite supportive for the moment, It look like Clark is now good friend with Bridget and helping her. Goddess I so much understand Bridget worry about school and 眼rka now!
Date: 07/04/19 01:28 pm Title: Where's the European Space Agency Housed Again?
Bridget Sister is such a adorable and lovely dork, let me hug her... Aaawww and yes we got Clark.... that headbutt reality and shatter it... I'm I the only one thinking it must really hurt or I'm I just a dork undercover?
Seriously, that was a nice chapter and .... F-word , look like their mom is a fanatic faith and believe blinded woman. ;-;
Date: 07/04/19 01:17 pm Title: Saving Myself From Tears
Transphobia..... fuck can hummanity not become something not blind or stupid, pink hair, a skirt .... is that a boy.... absolutely not ... A skirt a fucking skirt... Gosh my heart hurt cause of that shop clerc, very rude and bad behavior, seriously Im feeling sick cause that really happen and it suck so much ;-;
Also , Dare look brighter then before, even if a robot... can she sense pain... cause she definitely have emotion and feeling ,also gecko man is a jerk, I approve Dare action and Aim!
Date: 07/04/19 01:06 pm Title: Post Saint Nick's Chaotic Behavior
No.... why is it making me cry why Katie, why such emotion, relatable and some less
This chapter is a goddam fight over my emotion, anger for that relatable dad, sadness for Sarka... and a bit of happiness and relieve for her to have bridget... in her life ;-;
Date: 07/04/19 12:57 pm Title: Bonding Glue
Oh gosh an AMA, that is one heck of an ending chapter scene, and gosh im crying , why is the sweet and kind always hurt ;-; , the intro already mafe me cry of joy and relieve and have made my heart so heavy ... truly one of the most emotional story chapter I have got the chance to read... And Sarka is just so goddam vulnerable too ;-; I completely understand what bridget must feel for the cutest shark girl and her now future-legal daughter
Date: 07/04/19 12:45 pm Title: Shady Business
Oh , for fox sake... why is 眼rka dad such an idiot she live the same grieve as you do for losing your wife, she lost her mom. That she emrged or trans should not give you a asshole reason to throw her out.
Gosh, Bridget is a real role model
Date: 07/04/19 12:33 pm Title: Winter Hiking
Ooooh, Now I clearly understand, Karel, morgan and Kl疵a are the Greater coat fo arms of the country. that a nice Idea and once again a great educational one.
Also the use of social media post/update was a really good and well used time laps
But, can the trash and smelly egocentric human stop thinking money can buy people, seriously being rich and spoiled with money is being poor in life experience and most type of pain, pleasure and passion. Not every case but in a lot, and company thinking as people as tool to step higher and discard when used just make me hurt as hell, but it is life on earth in most situation
Date: 07/04/19 12:17 pm Title: Tempting Fate
Oh gosh , we have a Dare b25; A DARE!! She look so sweet gosh I wish we would be able to give life to that sweetheart and fluffball!
Also, I so fucking love the idea of social media post , it is really a nice upgrade ^^
Also, Karel or Wrecking Lion... should I be concerned about the wrecking part of its hero name ?
And yes Dare is right fluffiness is life
Date: 07/04/19 12:11 pm Title: First Uploads are the Hardest
I really like the fact that you already made us learn more about where Bridget live, I never hear about the Czech Republic, and Im gonna inform myself about it, there no reason to stay ignorznt about a new place that can give you new knowlege, Also love the use of a Streamer mouse girl, as the main character, not a hero, nor a vilain just a mousegirl that like thinkering and having genius idea! It is a nice change of pace
Date: 06/18/19 03:21 am Title: First Uploads are the Hardest
Good intro to a great series. The only shortcoming in this chapter is that the reader needs to have gone through the first couple chapters of Kammi Kettu or another story in the verse to understand what the MC is referencing in the first couple paragraphs, but otherwise the story's going well!
Date: 06/14/19 01:49 pm Title: KNOCK KNOCK MOUSE GONNA GIVE IT TO YA
Damn, poor Non, his mom is completely crazy to do that to her child because of who he was deep inside. And I'm probably sure Bridget and Cy are gonna become friends, or atleast somehow work together in the future. Also I really hope Bridget adopt Non, because he really deserve a mother's like her that moreover know how he really feel now and before and that will only be able to love him. Thank you for the good chapter and the feeling Katie !
Author's Response: They/them pronouns for Non, they're agender, but thank you
Date: 05/31/19 05:44 am Title: First Uploads are the Hardest
I did read the other chapter and found it preachy but unobjectionable. It didn't contribute any plot development, so it was a disruption of the story. I consider that to be something that can be overlooked, given the nature of the site. Sometimes an author just needs to work through personal issues on paper so the occasional dud chapter is to be expected.
As to the more recent chapter, there's dissing on and hating on, and you've crossed over. I'm not personally religious and don't participate in any organized religions - but hate is hate and I don't read hateful rhetoric for enjoyment purposes. I'm no longer entertained by this story so I'm moving on to other things.
Date: 05/30/19 07:17 pm Title: First Uploads are the Hardest
I can't get over the fact it's taking place in Czech Republic. I am from Prague and I find it funny to sudennly read a Czech names inside an english written story.
Author's Response: Oh s*** hey! I am f****** surprised to see one of us on here but yeah it's in the South Moravia region near the Austria border since I grew up there. I'm vagueing the "gympl" I went to as the one Bridget went to and Kl疵a and 眼rka are going to right now. Anyways, thanks for reading, hope you enjoy it!
Date: 05/30/19 06:26 pm Title: The First Time
I was enjoying this story initially, but it's gotten preachy and hateful, so I've decided to unfollow it.
I hope you're able to work through your issues.
Author's Response: Did you miss the whole chapter that was just about explaining trans people? Ah well you wouldn't be happy with my plans in the future is dissing organised religion is hitting you this hard. Grandpa V當lav is definitely not inviting you when he smokes whole ribs
Date: 05/06/19 11:46 pm Title: Where's the European Space Agency Housed Again?
Wow! Shots fired! At me!
I didn't think it was a Polygraph Test in the first place. I just call things that force people to tell the truth Lie Detectors.
I still think it's biased. Different things are true to different people. I said as much when she first used it. You know the shit i said at the end about the shithead dad still considering Sarka his son. It doesn't matter that he was wrong because it was still objectively true to him.
An objective truth is different from a lie that someone is trying to push as the truth.
Good story though.
Author's Response: And the shots missed because I specifically included the bit of "Zaps for misgendering someone if they're out to you." 眼rka was out to her dad, outed by accident but still outed. It's why she got kicked out and is living with Bridget who adopted her.
Date: 04/28/19 11:31 pm Title: Post Saint Nick's Chaotic Behavior
That's a ridiculously biased lie-detector/truth-telling device. In the fathers case him having a son is true to him just because it's a lie for you doesn't mean it's a lie for him. That would be like a cop putting said device on an innocent person, but due to the fact that the cop thinks that they're guilty the device goes off even when the innocent is telling the truth. That's pretty much what's happening here. Due to the fact that the "Cop"(main character) only thinks of Sarka as a daughter the device goes off whenever the "innocent"(the shithead ex-dad) says something that isn't true to the "cop".
Don't get me wrong it's a great story, but that sets me off.
Author's Response: It's a Lasso of Truth, not a Polygraph. The tangible, traceable, observable truth is that 眼rka is a girl. Refusing to see her as such and misgendering her is ergo not telling the truth. And not telling the truth is lying.
Date: 04/27/19 12:24 pm Title: Post Saint Nick's Chaotic Behavior
Very sweet chapter, made me happy. Didn't advance the storyline all that much, but sometimes you have to take a break from the action and handle the administrative paperwork to keep the bureaus off your back. Nobody wants The Authorities in their front yard.
Date: 04/23/19 09:53 pm Title: Bonding Glue
The interplay between your characters during the AMA is so sweet. I feel like I'm watching it on a stream. Our mouse I such a good mom.
I am worried about what's going to happen with Sharkies dad. He's an asshole, but will he cause some legal issues?
Author's Response: He deserves some legal issues, but since 眼rka is only 14 she doesn't have an ID yet so it's easier to make her disappear. Thanks for the prompt to address it though, Derby.
Date: 04/18/19 01:38 pm Title: First Uploads are the Hardest
From the very first moment of the story I loved your protagonist. She's plucky and I love the aspect of a YouTuber in another country experiencing the emergence. Now.... The question is do they travel for conventions after they change.