Date: 06/18/19 03:29 am Title: Second Wave
Well, this chapter's a rollercoaster of emotions. It's a really good setup to the rest of the story, though, and it really helps me feel for the character. Not just that, but having an interesting, realistic moral conflict over a scenario that can happen to anyone? I love it.
Date: 06/11/19 03:42 pm Title: Hero?
Damn, It was gorgeous to read and the catnip high was perfect, it looks as she has the same weakness and strength that a cat has but do she hate water? We may need to see that in the future
and the part about redd looks teasingly nice... :3
Date: 06/11/19 12:29 pm Title: Hero?
I'm sure Redd would love to play with you again cutie~
But also gosh what a fun chapter! I love all of this. It's just so cute and adorable. The catnip is just... So friggin cute. Someone get this girl some NIP and CUDDLES. Stat!
Date: 05/12/19 07:11 pm Title: Training
Noooo, this cant be the latest chapter? please update soon. The writing is definitely on point and I absolutely adore Maya, also Michelle is super adorable as well abd I think if the two of them do get together they might create an adorapocalypse. The cutest end of the world you've ever seen
Author's Response: Haha, no worries. There's a lot more left to go! Ch 7 should be along in a few days :D
Date: 04/26/19 12:07 am Title: Second Wave
Yeah, I figured the newness of her form, the shocking pointlessness of the attack, and the fact she was only falling 3 stories all worked against her. So it's doesn't break suspension of disbelief at all.
In the future, though, I expect her to do better :-)
Date: 04/25/19 11:45 am Title: Fresh Start
Just realized I can rate each chapter, so I went back and gave them all 5's. Although I really hated the unfairness of her getting kicked off a roof. I thought that cats always landed on their feet. If you're interested, there was a scientific study done in NYC once regarding how far cats can fall and survive the fall. And how they survive those falls. Fascinating information about our feline friends. Might be good research for a cat-girl story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yea, she kind of get's caught up in a whole lot of unfairness at the start. As to her not landing on her feet. I actually gave that a lot of thought. I figured she has two things working against her. First, she may have some cat instincts, but she still has human ones as well. So she's not quite as maneuverable in the air. The second being that her tail weight to body weight ratio is lower than that of a normal cat. Having said that I did totally look that up. Fascinating stuff indeed.
Date: 04/24/19 02:13 pm Title: Fresh Start
Honestly, I was enjoying it until that last chapter. Her legs are broken? She doesn't call her friend? She signs a document from some creepy dude without fully reading it? Yeah...that's just dumb. And what 'hero' knocks someone off a roof and why wouldn't he be arrested? You're telling me the WHOLE world and government doesn't care about the people who changed and yet the heroes can do whatever they want? Yeah, the last chapter ruined it for me.
Author's Response: Oook. Well, I'm sure you won't actually read this, buuuut for anyone else. She doesn't have a phone or remember his number. She doesn't want to provide a link to her old identity and get arrested/killed. Kind of a lot of reasons really. Depression is a thing. She didn't feel like she had a choice. Yes it is dumb, she acknowledges that it's stupid. Hope overrides that. People make poor decisions everyday. Sounds like you won't be reading more, but if you do, perhaps you'll learn more about Mr. Red Jacket.
Date: 04/23/19 09:32 am Title: Fresh Start
Excellent new addition to this universe. That idiot realized just how badly he messed up? Too little, too late. At least Maya's gunna get her ability to walk back! And maybe some telekinesis to boot! Of course, it has a cost...
(Despite how much he ticked me off, I legitimately do hope that we see more of the red jacket dumbass in the future. I will admit that I am kinda curious to see where he goes from here as a character.)
Date: 04/16/19 09:14 am Title: Second Wave
The first time I read this chapter I was like "no fucking way they're a first time writer I don't but it." I love how your story helps expand the Lore of how companies are dealing with this, but feels so organic and fresh as well. I can't wait to read more.