Date: 04/13/19 07:56 am Title: Homesickness: an SSSC III submitted novel.
I'm kinda sad there isn't more. This feels so incomplete, I'd love to see the motivations, learn who our fearless god is, learn more about our main character. We get a glimpse of who she was but not much. I know this is for a contest but I really hope after Bullied that maybe you'll expand. (Still loving Bullied by the way but this is fun too!)
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry. I do have the concept in mind how this could be expanded, but, yeah, it would have to be done after Bullied and when my ongoing stories are completed. Thank ya for checking this one out! :D
Date: 04/10/19 08:46 pm Title: Homesickness: an SSSC III submitted novel.
Very interesting. I know this was done for a contest that must have some limitations to consider, but there is so much potential for a much longer story here. I hope you might consider expanding it to a full conclusion after the contest.
Author's Response: Thank ya, and yeah, I had considered this to be a much longer story at one point, but yes, I was working within restrictions. If I do expand on this, I'll do so with the full idea I originally had. That would include who this reader was before being sucked into the story and would follow the tale to its end. :)
Thank ya again for reading and letting me know your thoughts. I hope to come back to this too! :D