Reviews For Draft Dodger
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Reviewer: AimeeD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/17/19 11:26 pm Title: The Beginning

Very interesting and well written plot about tg.

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/11/19 05:02 pm Title: Spring Break Climax

Excellent chapter, awesome story line

Reviewer: sourmashwhiskey Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/11/19 04:57 pm Title: Conclusion

Great story!

Reviewer: Sammy1997 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/11/19 04:26 pm Title: The Beginning

I enjoyed this story alot, wonderful job!

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed Report
Date: 04/11/19 05:00 am Title: The Beginning

Oh, no! Jasmine had it made but the last remnant of William decided to come out and play. Now Jasmine wants to come back.

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/10/19 05:47 pm Title: Homecoming Week Continues

I'm glad to see that things are beginning to get straightened out. This ain't going to be easy.

Reviewer: sourmashwhiskey Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/09/19 08:12 pm Title: Reversal Course

Not sure where this story is going now...

Reviewer: Jennifer Brock Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/09/19 07:42 pm Title: Reversal Course

It's very interesting that the character switched from identifying as Jasmine but using male pronouns to identifying as William but using female ones.

I hope the new school has some friends for her.

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/04/19 10:38 pm Title: The Beginning

Looks like Jasmine is becoming Jasmine. She has admitted to like being a girl, she just doesn't like the Male appendage.

Reviewer: Trumf Signed Report
Date: 04/04/19 05:16 pm Title: The Beginning

Interesting story. It should really be under "sci-fi" or something else though, since it's not realistic gender change involving "feminizing audio", which doesn't exist in real life.

Reviewer: Amanda Lynn Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/03/19 04:12 am Title: The Beginning

Interesting how accurate you have captured the current political situation!
Like the story, keep it up.

Reviewer: Lailaluvs00 Signed Report
Date: 04/03/19 02:46 am Title: Spring Break

Btw it's self conscious, not subconscious

Reviewer: Sammy1997 Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/02/19 08:26 am Title: The Beginning

Im interested to see if their plan plays out how they’d like it to, and if it does how will their kid react?this is good so far , keep going

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