Well constructed story line, realistic physical and sexual description, and two characters who seem very much alive. It's ripe for either prequels or sequels.
Well done story of friends sharing personal experiences together.
Wow. Damn. Just... wow. Obviously these two just need to get together already. Some SERIOUS compulsory heterosexuality going on for the both of them right now.
I think we need to go to book two with Holly being pregnant from their previous tryst
Wow. I don't know how you managed to make the chore that is dilating sexy, but boy howdy you did it!