Reviews For The Fairest Sex
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Reviewer: Maryjane Signed Report
Date: 04/03/19 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well done, I really enjoyed your story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks~!

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/01/19 11:57 am Title: Chapter 1

An interesting story, especially from the perspective of the physical changes.
The ending was a little abrupt, but I guess you told the story you wanted to tell.
Nice job, and thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thanks~! Sorry the ending was a bit abrupt. I originally had a longer scene, but had to cut it due to submission length restrictions on DA. I'd like to continue this sometime though...

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/30/19 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah, much better, now. Good job. If you could do a little editing, it would help. You have a tendency to leave out words.

Author's Response: Leave out words? I'll have to re-read through it again to double check, but I don't think I did that? It might just be a problem with the HTML formatter I used.

Reviewer: AlexiaRose Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/30/19 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh if only I could be changed like that and be all sexy and kinky like I should be.

Author's Response: If only we ALL could, amirite?

Reviewer: AimeeD Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/30/19 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Great TG story!"

Author's Response: Thank you~!

Reviewer: Portia Bennett Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/29/19 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

It says complete story; however, I don't think that is the case. Hopefully, there is more.

Author's Response: WHOOPS. Had some formatting problems. Went ahead and fixed it~

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