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Reviewer: Jennifer Brock Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/09/19 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is a fun story - even if you have to suspend a little disbelief about how hormones work, the machinations of the story require it, so I'm willing. Also, VS doesn't sell French maid outfits, but since that's an essential plot point I have to let it go - that scene could have happened in a Frederick's, but they don't have famous models; for purposes of this story there's a VS that sells fantasy costumes even when it's not Halloween.

I don't think it's been stated, but so I don't get squicky I'm assuming that Aunt Kate was Jamie's parent's sister, which makes Uncle Bill not a blood relative.

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for your feedback and lovely review. I thought I'd seen maid outfits at VS but maybe not. I think suspending disbelief is crucial in most of these stories unfortunately

Reviewer: Lunatastic Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 04/10/19 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really good base. Looking forward to more =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your lovely words & review. I hope you like part 4!

Reviewer: Anonymous_user86 Signed Report
Date: 04/09/19 09:29 am Title: Chapter 3

Nice story

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