Reviews For Rairy Contrary
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Reviewer: Alexandra Rios Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/21/19 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 An Asshole

This is a terrific beginning. The characters are vivid and differentiated and the dialogue pops. Where does it go?

Author's Response: I do plan on getting back into this story but right now I've been busy with editing 'The Saga of Adrian' and getting it turned into a book. I'm almost done with the second draft after that I hope to get people to read it so I can get feedback and change what needs changing.

Reviewer: Headhunter Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 05/08/19 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2 A Lovely Dress

Holy crap was she getting stab? Wonder if she'll make to the hospital

Reviewer: Lilchelly Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/21/19 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1 An Asshole

oh my GOD. Sliced off her ear?! The actual... what the... I cant... Oh my GOD!

Reviewer: AlexaTiresias Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/20/19 04:55 am Title: Chapter 1 An Asshole

Poor girl. I hope things get better for her. A good story, and one I hope you will continue.

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