Date: 08/25/19 04:25 am Title: Chapter 3 Agonizing Retreat
I'm really seeing a lot of possibility with this story. I love rairy's background and her situation and I can't wait to see more. I really like your writing style and how you blend the flashbacks in with the current situation. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you I appreciate the praise and I'm glad you're enjoying it. This and my Adrian story are my favorites by far.
Date: 06/21/19 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 An Asshole
This is a terrific beginning. The characters are vivid and differentiated and the dialogue pops. Where does it go?
Author's Response: I do plan on getting back into this story but right now I've been busy with editing 'The Saga of Adrian' and getting it turned into a book. I'm almost done with the second draft after that I hope to get people to read it so I can get feedback and change what needs changing.