Reviewer: Allibotonist Signed Report
Date: 05/06/19 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love all your stories. Can't wait to see what else you write.

Author's Response: Thanks! New one up now-- a short Sci Fi piece.

Reviewer: April Showers Signed Report
Date: 03/20/19 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story. You're really great at capturing the experience of transforming, making it sensual.

Reviewer: Lady Yuki Signed Report
Date: 03/18/19 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was a fun story but it doesn't feel like a one-shot. With the rules that were laid out for Jacquie and the possibility of turning back it feels like a much longer story that has just had the exposition take place.

Reviewer: Elron Signed Report
Date: 03/18/19 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent idea for a story. Pretty intriguing opportunity to learn about the other half of the population.

I like how it doesn't have to be permanent. Too many times the punishment far outweighs the crime.

And it would be nice to pop in on Jacquie around day 28 to see how she did.

Great job!

Reviewer: Roadbandit Signed Report
Date: 03/18/19 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent storyline , but it should be more then one chapter.