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Reviewer: FyoraSilverwolf Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 07/17/19 09:39 am Title: The Hooded Figure

This was very good. I really liked the descriptions of the change and the reasoning behind it.

Reviewer: Lamento Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/11/19 07:01 pm Title: Xecanthys Himself

I'm not sure if you meant to mark it as complete or not, but I'd have to agree with Zapper. It doesn't feel finished, although it's a good start.

Reviewer: Zapper Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 06/08/19 02:51 pm Title: Xecanthys Himself

I'd call this a good start not a complete story. There were a couple of typos but nothing that prevented me from enjoying what you've written.

Reviewer: Madway Signed Report
Date: 06/06/19 02:16 am Title: The Hooded Figure

I'm not sure why the first couple of paragraphs is repeated with minor differences, at first I thought it was a time travel thing, but it wasn't.

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