Great fun! More please, after revealing the magic potential of the sketchpad, please don't leave us hanging. (I hope it has a lot of pages left.) Nice illustrations, enhancing the tale.
I loving this storyline,you done a great job so far.
Love the map; just like I imagined it. Took me a minute to catch the pronoun use. I think I'm going to like this world.
Self Portrait, Self Discovery was a wonderful story when I first read it, and it'll be great to read it the second time as you upload it here!