Date: 02/28/19 04:50 pm Title: Prologue - Press Start To Play
Great start and it makes compelling reading. I know absolutely zilch about pinball but you’ve sucked me right in. Excellent.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm glad I didn't lose you. Sometimes I know writers can be so involved with whatever hobby we love we make it hard to explain what we're doing to normal folx. Thank you again!
Date: 02/26/19 07:33 pm Title: Prologue - Press Start To Play
I love this! It's so relatable, and Freya gives the narrative such a distinctive voice. I look forward to seeing what comes next!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad that you like Freya. She's a mess but she's my mess