Date: 04/20/13 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've been reading all of your stories lately, Panty Boy, and I have been enjoying them greatly. The are quite a few reoccurring themes in your stories... Character names, the humiliations felt by the boy and so forth. I'd love to read a story where the boys friends actually find out about his humiliating situation and know that he IS a boy and not mistaken for a girl... Or maybe he ends up with his hair getting cut like a boys, but still made to wear dresses, hehe...
Anyways, main thoughts on this story... It was fun, but the continuity was all over the place. At one point, Beth and her mother were going to wait for Kelly and his mother at the ice cream parlor while Kelly had his diaper changed, but they sort of faded out of existence and we're introduced to the new girl, Nancy. Towards the end of part 2, Nancy and her mother were waiting outside of the dance shop, but again, like Beth, vanished from existence in this part. It would have been fun to have Nancy see him wetting his cute little dance outfit and maybe realizing who he really was, but mew... :P
Overall, I did like the story, but I can't rate it as highly as most... Mostly due to the continuity and that it's another unfinished story. You write great stories although they can be repetitive. I find myself wanting to see what happens next and then the story ends abruptly. I do hope to read more of your work in the future, though. :)