Date: 03/04/19 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is a delight. There's so much fun to have with this story and the main characters shenanigans never cease to entertain.
The bus conversation is hilarious for a second i thought that was how you were going to introduce her impending girlfriend but it was a nice interaction regardless. The family... Was about what you would expect. I do wonder when the cats going to get out of the bag though? I dont know that it will ever be easier for her to come out but at some point she has to realize that she can say she wanted this? Or maybe something in her research will pull up someone who went through something similar? Idk. Im particularly excited to see how thay revelation is handled.
Author's Response: I wouldn't know anything about any impending girlfriends, officer! The cat (girl) will get getting out of the bag in due time. That much, at least, has been planned ahead for a while now.
Date: 03/04/19 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm going to be perfectly honest here - I'm not feeling this story like I thought I would. It's not bad at all, but there's just things that detract from the story at hand, like the slow pacing, or the character not doing an obvious thing and tell everyone that she likes being a girl. It's just...I don't know, distracting?
Author's Response: I don't mind people not liking my story, but your reasons don't really make sense to me. If anything, the pacing is incredibly fast. We're only on chapter four and the character's conflicts have already been established and she's undergone a life-changing event, so I'm not sure what you expect to have happened by now. As for why she won't tell anyone, I feel like this was well-established in chapter one. The main character doesn't live in our world; she lives in a world where admitting to someone that you're transgender, a word that she doesn't even know, is akin to telling someone that you'd rather have AIDS. Although, even if she did live in our world, is it really so hard to imagine why a trans person might be anxious to come out?
Date: 02/27/19 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Im dying laughing at the last two paragraphs. Amazing. They are lowkey my favorite parts now. Its funny to see dysphoria treated as a symptom of the disease rather than of society. Well... Not funny like i wanna laugh about it. Tragic af... But very interesting to read. Im super excited to see how this all goes.
Date: 02/27/19 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nice chapter, kinda funny seeing the doctors acting like its the end of the world for him, they probably never thought some one might of wanted it before I guess. About the dysphoria, think she'll be fine for the most part, since she wanted the change to happen.
Once again thank you for the great chapter and keep up the hard work.
Date: 02/27/19 11:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Sits starring at watch waiting for dysphoria to set in, every now and then a smile sets in before they catch themselves and look back at their watch for the dysphoria that is sure to set in... any time now... "Maybe I should of asked the doctor when I'll stop feeling good?"
Date: 02/27/19 10:34 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm sure I'll be feeling super dysphoric about this new body any day now. Yep. Any day now. The doctor told me it would happen soon and I'm sure I'll feel super upset. Yep. Sometime soon.
Also please mc eat a meal! Be good to yourself!
Author's Response: Stay tuned for more about this character's upcoming dysphoria crisis.
Date: 02/21/19 05:13 am Title: Chapter 2
I remember before I started transitioning, I was so desperate to be a girl that I tried a magic ritual that I found online. The magic runes had to be drawn in blood, so I took a hobby knife and sliced my palm. Needless to say, the ritual did not work. The point is, dysphoria sucks and I (and many other trans people I know) would do anything to be a biological girl.
Date: 02/21/19 01:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Wonder if him passing out was just an instance of the virus already being in him, if so well I guess the jab with needle becomes irrelevant but then again that could mean anything like something related to blood circulation. Overall good chapter, keep up the hard work
Author's Response: We'll find out more about the protagonist's fainting soon.
Date: 02/18/19 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Forgot to put a rating on here. The descriptions of the game makes me wonder what it's real world counterpart is? It feels like a mixture between smash Bros and street fighter.
Author's Response: I don't know anything about fighting games, so I don't think this one has a real world counterpart.