Date: 02/17/19 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm going to disagree with the other reviews. I think the ending is fine as it is. What I wish is that the middle section was a bit more fleshed out. Like maybe if we got to see the manager dropping some hints about what the creature is, nothing too specific but just enough for the audience to piece a few details together, especially since it's behavior seems to change so much at the end when the character chooses to willingly surrender himself. I want some clues about what it's after.