Date: 12/05/19 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
her eyes are cool af wow
and serra's crush is way more obvious now lol
and she can turn into a massive dragon now omg yes
also, i'm really sorry. I read this story when you were first uploading it, but never reviewed (on my old account). I loved it then, and i love it now. all your writing is incredible. thank you
Date: 12/05/19 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 7
more bonding yay
that old guy at the counter was really grumpy bloody hell
and the party at the end scares me a bit, if they'll try to kidnap her to sell her. it wouldn't work, but they could try...
also i really love all the descriptions of things in this story. in all your stories. god they're amazing. you're amazing.
Date: 12/05/19 11:53 am Title: Chapter 6
aahhh, i loved the bonding nia had with them all, and its amazing how quick she's learning the language
and god i really love learning about fictional world's magic and histories and stuff so that was cool near the end
the Uthendyr attack was scary though, glad they hid...
Date: 12/05/19 11:35 am Title: Chapter 5
really like how she was gradually learning to control her new body, and then being taught magic. but then that strange creature attacked and she seems like she can't get back to the stone man (is he a golem? or something else?)
Date: 12/05/19 11:23 am Title: Chapter 4
this stone man is strange, but i'm really glad he helped Nia, magically giving her a new body like that, she would've died if not. but now she's not human, and is instead some strange sounding but very cute sounding species aww
Date: 12/05/19 10:40 am Title: Chapter 2
those tunnels sound really scary, floating around and hoping you dont crash into a wall, before crashing into a wall and being attacked by strange creatures. i;m really worried about steph and the others they were seperated from though, i hope they're okay. but considering whats happened to nia and co i think they're not...
where is she now though? o.O
Date: 12/05/19 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like stories where a/the main character has a physical disability, even when the disability is nothing like my own. even more so if they're a trans woman with a physical disability, like i am :p
it's a really interesting start, nia's meekness and anxiety is a big mood and the portal thing at the end is cool
Date: 05/02/19 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
I do hope you continue to update this story occasionally. Slow and irregular updates are understandable, since you’re also balancing writing Kammi with working with others on their Kammi-verse stories. You’re juggling what, 3 different stories in 2 separate universes, while also creating lore and corresponding with other writers about said universes. If I may ask, do you have any plans for Pellan Rise?
Regarding the contents of this chapter, should I start stockpiling arrows, potions, food, and clothes for the “Rescue the fellow Earth-borns trip?”
Date: 03/02/19 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh Nia and Sarra, rawr. I really do like their interactions together and I hope, now that Nia has a human form, her sharing a room and bed with Sarra might end up taking on a somewhat different meaning. Also the two of them are stupidly adorable just like Karen and Syl. Awe can you imagin how good of big sisters and support both Sarra with Nia would make to Karen. Ok they all need a double date, it needs to happen.
Date: 03/01/19 09:26 am Title: Chapter 6
I love how you communicate that she doesn't know the language perfectly yet still is learning. It's so awesome. Also yikes giant dinosaur eldritch horror! Also... I'm a little confused what Nia looks like at this point. Does she look like an anthropomorphic dragon child or something? Sorry I'm not the best at understanding things sometimes...
Date: 02/24/19 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
I really love Dragon!Nia. She’s learning their language at an amazing rate! And magic!! She’s learning and learning, and she’ll be a master one day! It’s sad that she lost the stone man though. This is a really cool story! I hope Nia gets to meet Karen again, eventually.
Date: 02/21/19 05:26 am Title: Chapter 4
It’s nice to see that Nia’s finally in a body that fits her gender, even if it isn’t human. But it’s cool that she’s a little dragonette! I wonder how she goes from tiny dragon to Supet Cool Knight Errant Nia Voidweaver? Where does she get the name Voidweaver?? It’s really cool knowing where she ends up, but not having a CLUE how she gets there!