Date: 05/02/19 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
I do hope you continue to update this story occasionally. Slow and irregular updates are understandable, since you’re also balancing writing Kammi with working with others on their Kammi-verse stories. You’re juggling what, 3 different stories in 2 separate universes, while also creating lore and corresponding with other writers about said universes. If I may ask, do you have any plans for Pellan Rise?
Regarding the contents of this chapter, should I start stockpiling arrows, potions, food, and clothes for the “Rescue the fellow Earth-borns trip?”
Date: 03/02/19 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh Nia and Sarra, rawr. I really do like their interactions together and I hope, now that Nia has a human form, her sharing a room and bed with Sarra might end up taking on a somewhat different meaning. Also the two of them are stupidly adorable just like Karen and Syl. Awe can you imagin how good of big sisters and support both Sarra with Nia would make to Karen. Ok they all need a double date, it needs to happen.
Date: 03/01/19 09:26 am Title: Chapter 6
I love how you communicate that she doesn't know the language perfectly yet still is learning. It's so awesome. Also yikes giant dinosaur eldritch horror! Also... I'm a little confused what Nia looks like at this point. Does she look like an anthropomorphic dragon child or something? Sorry I'm not the best at understanding things sometimes...
Date: 02/24/19 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
I really love Dragon!Nia. She’s learning their language at an amazing rate! And magic!! She’s learning and learning, and she’ll be a master one day! It’s sad that she lost the stone man though. This is a really cool story! I hope Nia gets to meet Karen again, eventually.
Date: 02/21/19 05:26 am Title: Chapter 4
It’s nice to see that Nia’s finally in a body that fits her gender, even if it isn’t human. But it’s cool that she’s a little dragonette! I wonder how she goes from tiny dragon to Supet Cool Knight Errant Nia Voidweaver? Where does she get the name Voidweaver?? It’s really cool knowing where she ends up, but not having a CLUE how she gets there!