Reviews For A Valentine Favor
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Reviewer: Clare bear Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/17/19 05:15 pm Title: A Valentine Favor

Was very confused for a second because my name on here is Clare bear, I loved the story though! :D

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/15/19 11:38 pm Title: A Valentine Favor

Wow, great little story. That did not go the way I was expecting. A dream.
Your descriptions and details were excellent. I had a mental picture of the characters and their surroundings.
I do wish it had been a little longer, some parts seemed rushed.
And it would have been even better if Darren had awoken wearing Bianca's panties. But that might have taken the story in a different direction than you wanted to go.
Thank you for writing this story.

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