Love, love, love your story!
This is great! Keep writing. I love the details you're including in the change and I can't wait to see what else happens!
Waiting to see how she develops and adjusts to the changes.
Hell yea!!!!! I can’t wait for chapter 3!!!! Keep it up!
Keep it up!
Great start to the story! Can’t wait to see where it goes!!
interesting could be really good but this short excerpt isn't enough to judge