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Reviewer: JoeForest Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/25/19 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Damn, this is amazing! Can't wait to read more of it.

Reviewer: ForeverEgg Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/06/19 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a delightful style. Far more colorful than im used to and generally just really stinking good. The characters feel real in their idiosyncrasies and generally i just look forward to seeing how these two dorks fare on their new adventure.

I honestly am dumbfounded that the world you have written seems so neat, consistent, and belieable. It feels just the right steps from reality to be possible. It makes sense in its nonsense.

Reviewer: Tau Gamma Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/06/19 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really excellent.

It does leave me with a sneaking suspicion about your college coursework.

Reviewer: Tessarion Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/06/19 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Honestly, with a little editing, and *maybe* toning down the smut aspects just a tad, I could easily see you submitting this to a professional venue like Strange Horizons. The writing is *that* good.

Reviewer: Animasta Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 02/06/19 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Holy shit, the dialogue was incredible. I'm not quite sure where this is going to go, but i am really excited to find out

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