Date: 02/06/19 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a delightful style. Far more colorful than im used to and generally just really stinking good. The characters feel real in their idiosyncrasies and generally i just look forward to seeing how these two dorks fare on their new adventure.
I honestly am dumbfounded that the world you have written seems so neat, consistent, and belieable. It feels just the right steps from reality to be possible. It makes sense in its nonsense.