Date: 01/25/19 05:49 pm Title: Last Chapter
I want a dose of his mixture. Please, oh please.
Outstanding story. I loved everything about this sci-fi romance. I really think this is one of my favorite stories ever.
The rating that comes with this review is for the entire story, all chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you'll join me for the next one!
Date: 01/25/19 03:09 pm Title: Last Chapter
Nice wrap up to your story. I'm glad Aurora and James finally figured out the truth about the serum.
I guess hooking up with James and ultimately getting married could be part of Aurora's revenge, but it seems instead like they are together for all the right reasons. They both seem to have come out of this experience as better people. And Sandy certainly got what she deserved. It would be the icing on the cake for Mark to have gotten Sandy pregnant with all the vacation sex they had.
I'd still never object to a little epilogue set a few years down the road to see how everyone is doing. Just can't get enough of your writing and pictures. Thanks for creating another wonderful story.
Author's Response: I often catch up with characters in other stories. So, while I might leave one with an inferred "they lived happily ever after", you'll find out details late. I did that, for instance, in Shades of Red.
Date: 01/25/19 03:01 pm Title: Family Visit I
Many times now as I have health problems I wish for this to be happening. I pray some nights for God to just make me the girl I should have been.
I have skipped rating because the chapters are short. All is good though. I am liking the plot & the way things are progressing.
Date: 01/24/19 09:31 pm Title: Moving Up
Well, where to begin?
Chloe, this story is fantastic!
I loved the medical /Sci fi aspect.
I liked how the changes were gradual, rather than overnight. Gave more time for character development.
The pictures are, of course, absolutely stunning. I just wish there were more. I'm almost willing to cheat on Coco, but I know she is saving herself for me.
The revenge aspect caught me completely by surprise and really made the story come alive. I'm so glad Aurora got a piece of Sandy's hide for all the deception she pulled. Karma is a beautiful bitch.
A few comments. One, there doesn't seem to be a big enough motive for Sandy to treat Jonah the way she did. Even if she told him and James the truth, Jonah could have remained Sandy's roommate and mom still pays the rent. As it was, Sandy set herself up for disaster by withholding the truth. Sandy is obviously a gold digger trying to hook James while taking rent and clothing money from Jonah and his mom.
I'm surprised James never tried to track down Jonah after Sandy said he moved away.
I was also surprised Sandy didn't ask James what would happen if a man injested the formula, after James explained what it would do to a woman.
I wonder if Roger is going to come looking for Aurora in Florida? She is pining for him, wearing his bracelet, and not dating any guys - even though they are probably lined up to date her. I'm still a hopeless romantic, and think they belong together. We'll see.
I wonder if Aurora will be capable of having kids. Might be a nice epilogue to the story.
The full history of Jonah/Aurora's flight training isn't revealed, but based on the story it would seem that Aurora needs a lot more Pilot In Command time in a chopper before being able to fly with passengers.
Chloe, I think this is one of your best stories.
Thank you, as always, for sharing with us.
Author's Response: You're sweet and some of what you pointed out was because, maybe, it was rushed. The good news is that some of your questions are answered in the last chapter!
Date: 01/24/19 02:21 pm Title: Inspiration
Hey Chloe - this story is pretty damn good. I think you sell yourself short with saying its not one of your best - I would disagree. Its well written, entertaining, sexy as hell. I would put it up there with some of your best. Don't put yourself down - the world is too eager to do that for you (it doesn't need any help). This is great stuff!
Author's Response: You're way too nice. But, really, if you like this, you're going to LOVE Pink Auburn TC (my next epic)!