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Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/06/19 04:53 am Title: It's a Dare

Looks like chapter two is repeated.
I can't believe Nancy set him up like that, although I would have liked that same opportunity. He was starting to enjoy himself inside her skin.
Can't wait for the next zip.

Reviewer: Mr5yy Signed starstarstarstarstar Report
Date: 03/05/19 01:08 pm Title: You Could Be Mine

I'm liking the start of the story so far. Can't wait for what chapter 4 leads to.

Reviewer: Elron Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/22/19 10:07 pm Title: You Could Be Mine

Great start to your story, but I think it would read better if it was written in the first person.
It's nice to see Neil wouldn't take advantage of Roger/Nancy. Chivalry ain't dead yet.
Can't wait to see who gets zipped next.

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