Oh, now that's quite a few plot twists to toss into a single chapter. It works, though. Deftly done.
So far I finding this to be a great story can't wait for further chapters
Really enjoyed this chapter. Just pace yourself and take your time!
Thanks for coming back and adding more to this story. It's really interesting.
This is amazing, I love it! I love Riza too and Chestier chester ROFG that's brilliant xD
Well, how did Riza survive the plague? Is this a tale of *two* meddling deities instead of just one? :p
Hope this gets continued at some point but what there is of it is great
Ooohhh exciting! Things are really happening now. I'm 100% all in for returned from the dead reveeeenge. This is a lot of fun to read and I can't wait for what comes next. And congratulations on your other writing!!
I liked this first chapter a lot. The battle scene felt visceral and real, like a forgotten myth. And the ending left me full of so many questions! I'm excited for what comes next.
I think this is a bold and interesting start. I thought the opening battle scene was brilliantly done. Looking forward to seeing how she fares.
I'm really enjoying Chester's character, and her snarkiness is fantastic. Her being trans kind of surprised me, but I guess we all find ways to hide it from ourselves.
I really like what you have written so far. I do hope you plan to continue this story.
I loved all your previous trans stories (there were full of delicious gender feels), I am intrigued by part one of this story can't wait to read more!
Well it's certainly amusing thus far!
Loving how this is going so far!
This is just the beginning. Can't wait to see what happens next.
I look forward to more! So far i really like this!
Very interesting start I'm left wondering what is to comeChristina
Ooh, I'm keen to see where this is going! Keep up the good work!