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Reviewer: I_Think Signed starstarstarstar Report
Date: 01/12/19 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1

The misspellings were cute but a bit difficult to read; it's a little similar to phonetically transliterating an accent, so I imagine some people enjoy it and some will be annoyed by it! I also feel that the implicit story is maybe a little too straightforward, and the characterizations seem to be only slightly hinted at. It is a colorful little scene, though!

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